Script Evaluation

From the start of my script process I had the idea of creating a documentary for WW1 history. I had a good idea on how to create a documentary as I created one for a following project. I created the first draft and gave it to my teacher for feedback. He came back with feedback on what sort of things to change for example the layout. I had to add in camera angles and motion of how the camera move as well to improve my script. I was told to move the names of my actors to the middle to match the accurate formate of a professional script.

After getting my feedback I changed the format of the script and made a second draft with all the adjustments asked by my teacher. I now have a better idea of the environment thats going on in my script as it has camera angles, description of the shot and professional layout. this now looks like a professional script that could be used to create my following documentary.