Script Evaluation

From the start of my script process I had the idea of creating a documentary for WW1 history. I had a good idea on how to create a documentary as I created one for a following project. I created the first draft and gave it to my teacher for feedback. He came back with feedback on what sort of things to change for example the layout. I had to add in camera angles and motion of how the camera move as well to improve my script. I was told to move the names of my actors to the middle to match the accurate formate of a professional script.

After getting my feedback I changed the format of the script and made a second draft with all the adjustments asked by my teacher. I now have a better idea of the environment thats going on in my script as it has camera angles, description of the shot and professional layout. this now looks like a professional script that could be used to create my following documentary.   

Final Version with Shooting Directions

Client Feedback

Client FEEDBACK - HUNTINGDON REMEMBERS.

Script client version

Shooting Script

My script with camera directions.

Huntingdon Remembers World War 1 Unit11 (Revised/Peer Feedback)

• Use italic when using stage directions to make it clearer to see and understand
• Change the format of the script as the Name of the characters have underlines, isn't professional layout of Script.
• Add Capital I's 
• Use brackets when indicating something 

All these changes have been made from the following first draft.

Huntingdon Remembers First Draft Unit11